My poem ‘Unfinished’ is part of this month’s London Grip. As always, it features an excellent line-up of poets and poems. Grateful thanks to editor, Michael Bartholomew-Biggs. https://londongrip.co.uk/2020/02/london-grip-new-poetry-spring-2020/
My poem ‘Unfinished’ is part of this month’s London Grip. As always, it features an excellent line-up of poets and poems. Grateful thanks to editor, Michael Bartholomew-Biggs. https://londongrip.co.uk/2020/02/london-grip-new-poetry-spring-2020/
This is excellent, Paul. And feels quite different? Great first line in the second stanza.
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Thanks so much Rob, so pleased to read your comments. I wrote and re-wrote this over many months. It was originally much longer, with references to any amount of ‘unfinished’ stuff. Yes, a bit different for me, I suppose; one of several I wrote with mystery in mind – rather than my usual observations/reflections of everyday life!
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